Sunday 6 March 2016

PT3 English Essay Example: Article

Example Answer: 

My Family's Outing at Bukit Segar



A couple weeks ago, my family and I went for an outing to Bukit Segar waterfall. The trip took us about an hour to reach our destination. It was a pleasant journey as we saw endless layouts of breathtaking terrain along the way.

The waterfall sparkled during that sultry day and the freshness of the air made the place magical. The mesmerizing scene of cascading waterfall made my siblings and I jumped into excitements as we changed into our swimming trunks. We dived into the crystal clear water with haste. The chilly water touched our nerves in a very serene way.

We were swimming and splashing water towards each other, laughter was bursting through the refreshing air, while others were seen to be netting some fishes. The overall experience was soothing to the ears and mind to listen the cascading waterfall splashed the cool water beneath. The paradise-like place was not a miss for me to take pictures. So, we took a family photo to keep the memorable day as a souvenir.

Our stomach began rumbling and roaring like a monster after some time in the water. My mother then spread the mat on the ground and began displaying food on it. She prepared many scrumptious delicacies for us to grab a bite. My father also helped her with arranging the food. My little brother and sister were the first to dig in. We finished the food as if we were fasting the whole time. Everyone was satisfied thus we packed our stuff and reached home before dusk.


The family outing at the waterfall was simply an example of how our family members bond and loosen up during our free time. All of us should keep a close-knitted relationship family because blood is thicker than water. There are plenty other ways of achieving it such as cooking together, cleaning the house together, visiting relatives who are close to our hearts, or even going to the park for basking or going to the movies. Therefore, healthy relationships among family can be accomplished for a healthier emotional growth. 
-MR

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