Monday, 14 September 2015

PT3 English Essay Example: Discussion


Example Answer

From the discussion of my brother and sister, I would agree with my sister to buy a microwave oven as a birthday gift for our beloved mother. There are just more pros than cons compared to buying a hairdryer.

Our mother is an active and smart lady. She always prepares meals at the dawn of the day before waking us up and goes to work. By having a microwave oven, she can save time in the kitchen and simply heat up prepared meals. By buying the microwave, not only we can buy her a tool, we can also buy her time so that she can have some time for herself too.

Even though our mother loves to style her hair, she doesn’t style it on her own. She prefers going to the saloon to get her hair done, other than to socialise with her friends there. Therefore, buying the hair dryer may lead to another pile of rarely used item in the house.

Additionally, the store we just surveyed at the nearest mall is currently making a once in a blue moon sale for the household items. The three of us can save money by buying the microwave oven instead of the hair dryer. This will be a huge advantage for us because a penny saved is a penny earned.

The bottom line is, I agree with my sister to get a microwave oven for my mother on her birthday. I just can’t wait for us to buy the gift and make our mother’s day. My sister and I also planned on making her a birthday cake.  We love our mother and we hope she will enjoy her upcoming birthday.

-MR

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